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1/14/2005 2:43 PM


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"It all started with the grand chief of the tribe "America". for close to a thousen years the tribe has wondred over around the great lake, learning the arts of the desert and beautiful coral riefs that dotted the Greate lake. It was the Chief Washington that made the bold desicion to miggrate the tribe south, away from the great lake, a nearby mountain which came to be the home of the spirits and later the gods.
hundreds of the American tribe migrated to the foots of the mountain.
But then a problem arised, further south there were dense jungles, full of dangerous animals and deadly deases!
North was the Great Lake, but they can't go back! the fish population won't take another fishing wave!
Washingtone's soloution was both ingenius and revoloutanery- they will construct a temporery large camp, with each "division" of the tribe work the land responsebly outside the city limits. The the phitest and most skilled people were called to biggin construction of roads, to increase trade and ease the farmer's works.
The new town was called Washington after the Great Chief himself!
Years pased, and even though the fish population, as claimed by scouts, was prospering, no body made the first step...
More Years passed and a new leader arised, called Yarks, this man decided that the village was over populated and created a miggration party: men, women, children, livestock and seeds begane a long journey down another lake, called the Lake of Grass, for the large Grasslands that surrounded him. the miggrents traveled for years aound the Northen shore of the Lake of Grass, and finall came to form another village, called New York. The name derives origenelly from Yarks, but over the years the settlers changed it to York, without noticing. At the same time people were beggening to understand that the worled is controled by spirits, one of the greates was Yark, or York, and the village itself belived to be a spirit was named New Yark- showing peoples wish for their town to be as great as Yark.
More immegrents were sent from Washington to form new villeges north in both sides of the Great Lake.
Philadelphia was constructed on the coast of the salt watered "Neverending Blue" next the villege of Boston was made on the river "Elk" (the name derives from the leader's totam at the time the river was found). The river Elk was discovered to be a huge spirit sending waves on shures every begging of the spring making the ground amazingly furtile. All villeges grew and in time even more settelments came to exist, these included Atlanta, which was built in a brave discion inside the jungles South of New York,
Houston- made up river of the river Elk, Seattle which came even norther to Houston, and a few more towns with the northest one being buffaloon the border wih the Azteck tribe. The Azteck tribe, from the point of the Americans were a bunch of barberians whose entire purpose in life was to rape and pillage, you can excepect the Aztecks atttude to be quite simmiler. Even though the two tribes were hostile to each other they still traded ideas, the americans, known for their great construction (Note: i do not mean wanders) traded their knowlage of architacture for the Aztecks knowlage of fire andd meltable rocks. meanwhile in the city of Houston an amazing discovery was being made! people there devolped a way to use the early symbols that were used by the governers to keep recors could be used for other things- this awesome idea quickly spread and was called "writing", elders in all towns sank into the stadies of art and their efforts gave fruit in a few genortions in the form of litrature!. As the Elders studied the arts of wrighting the younge and simple built, dug and farmed. roads began connecting villages that were now growing to awsome sizes, or cities- from the word "sit" great villages were old people sit... (ahh... the ignorence of peasents... ) and farmlands were being made better by an old technique that was passed on from genoration to genoration. even mines were bein constructed. In the cities grand temples were constructed to honore the sprits. However a new move began, a move that prometed the idea of elimanting the Aztecks. these people constripted people for war.
the new discovery of iron would prove invanurable when the time for war came.
and withen a few years that war came when the people of Buffalo were threatend and bolied until they swore aligence to the Aztecks (what other reason to do this unforgivable act would they have.
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1st chapter, called- the begging, from "the History of America" writen in the unverstie and Great Liberie in Washington for president Sherman in the great capitol of Houston 1350 AD"

Ok this is you might have noticed is only the begging.
i would like to get your feedbacks before delving into the secod chapter (who will be called "The Siege on Atlanta and Documaent of Death,(doesn't that sould like a HP book?))

1/26/2005 10:34 AM


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Yo people!
Why HASN'T ANYONE READ MY STORY?!
9/18/2005 10:14 AM
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What have you written?I cant understand much of this story
7/28/2006 9:47 PM


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hey i hv read it!, its pretty good. are you going ot finish it after these 5 months?
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